A Meeting in the Mind, Part 1
A good story should always have downtime for the characters. Sleeping, eating, reading, dreaming, and cooking all add depth to the story. Springjacks being a rabbit the size of a lynx. Very descriptive. And Marten thinking about Gauir all day.
This shows humanity. Great job, Dave.
Thank you kindly, Joseph.
Your comment also helped me realize that I goofed up and forgot to change the chapter name from the draft I copied XD
A good story should always have downtime for the characters. Sleeping, eating, reading, dreaming, and cooking all add depth to the story. Springjacks being a rabbit the size of a lynx. Very descriptive. And Marten thinking about Gauir all day.
This shows humanity. Great job, Dave.
Thank you kindly, Joseph.
Your comment also helped me realize that I goofed up and forgot to change the chapter name from the draft I copied XD