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A good story should always have downtime for the characters. Sleeping, eating, reading, dreaming, and cooking all add depth to the story. Springjacks being a rabbit the size of a lynx. Very descriptive. And Marten thinking about Gauir all day.

This shows humanity. Great job, Dave.

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