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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

I loved the character flow. When Paul and Kat started talking, it became real for me.

I thought her jumping from row to row was interesting, and could just imagine that horse running down the rows.

If more people wrote as people lived, books would make more sense.

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Saumya Sharma's avatar

I have never seen how grapevines are planted and have seldom been to farms. So, I couldn’t picture the scenes in my head. But it was an engaging read nonetheless.

Chapter 3, here I come!

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