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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

I thought your teaser yesterday was great, and I was right.

Your first chapter opening today is absolutely entrancing. I was riveted to my screen as I read the description of the castles, yes both of them, and then learned about the Riverran woman's Duty.

In one chapter, You gave a great background of the kingdom, the people, and both castles in one chapter.

Katrine seems like a capable young woman who would make a good adventuress.

And the closing of the chapter, now you have me interested in who is inhabiting the lower castle.

I can't wait to read more.

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Caitriana NicNeacail's avatar

This is great! I especially enjoyed the way it opens with the Castle in the Clouds (with me thinking that’s the titular castle) and then we learn that there’s another, equally/more mysterious, castle.

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