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The Awen spoke!

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I love this poem! Great vibe! ✨

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Pleased you enjoyed, Charlotte 🙂

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Yes, I did! I hope you’re write more poetry! ✨💜✨

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Why does this remind me of Metropolis Pt. 2?

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As in the old black & white German film?

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As in the old (ouch 😬😢) Dream Theater album.

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In that case, I don't know. I've never heard it before.

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I am utterly SHOOK at this revelation 😵 I was sure a man of such esteem would be intimately acquainted with classic Dream Theater!

At any rate, your poem reminds me of this song specifically from the aforementioned album. Do yourself a favor and give it a listen.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6qNgrtyUIQQ

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So it was that, yet again, The Inevitable occurred.

"The Inevitable" being the fact that I've surprised someone by not knowing a lick about something they'd fully expect me to be aware of 😂

Got the song saved to my history. I'll give it a listen on the way in to work.

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So, what's the verdict?

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Magnifique

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This is fantastic! Well done! Poetry is definitely not my strong suit but you’ve far outdone me here!

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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll have to take you at your word on that last bit, though 😂

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Obviously you haven’t read my poetry 🥴

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