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David Perlmutter's avatar

“Little more than a scratch,” she said, shrugging as she tossed the nail aside.

"A scratch?" retorted King Arthur "I've hacked off both of your arms!"

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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

I like the way you foreshadow and segue from one part of the story to the next.

I think Varro is going to very much enjoy the hunt and the bear he can sink his teeth into.

I believe that Gaiur's axe is going to feast as well.

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