The Red Bear, Part 2
“Little more than a scratch,” she said, shrugging as she tossed the nail aside.
"A scratch?" retorted King Arthur "I've hacked off both of your arms!"
"I've had worse. Now come on, ya pansy!"
I’m not dead yet!
Not gonna lie, am worried about that scratch.
I like the way you foreshadow and segue from one part of the story to the next.
I think Varro is going to very much enjoy the hunt and the bear he can sink his teeth into.
I believe that Gaiur's axe is going to feast as well.
“Little more than a scratch,” she said, shrugging as she tossed the nail aside.
"A scratch?" retorted King Arthur "I've hacked off both of your arms!"
"I've had worse. Now come on, ya pansy!"
I’m not dead yet!
Not gonna lie, am worried about that scratch.
I like the way you foreshadow and segue from one part of the story to the next.
I think Varro is going to very much enjoy the hunt and the bear he can sink his teeth into.
I believe that Gaiur's axe is going to feast as well.