Excellent. The pygmies with a gray leader, demon worshipper, the stripped humans, the tied up natives, the action, the daring, and the terror soarer turning into black ooze, only to rise up again.
That imagery isn't how it appeared in my head, but damn, I'll take that as a win! Giger's always been one of my favorite artists so I take that as a big compliment.
Excellent. The pygmies with a gray leader, demon worshipper, the stripped humans, the tied up natives, the action, the daring, and the terror soarer turning into black ooze, only to rise up again.
Great job.
Great chapter! This may be my favorite of yours yet.
Great writing! I love the sense of mystery you open with.
This whole story is great and I can't wait to see what happens next!
I must say, my favorite little detail is the play on words you used for the pterosaur/terror soarer.
That imagery isn't how it appeared in my head, but damn, I'll take that as a win! Giger's always been one of my favorite artists so I take that as a big compliment.