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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

Excellent. The pygmies with a gray leader, demon worshipper, the stripped humans, the tied up natives, the action, the daring, and the terror soarer turning into black ooze, only to rise up again.

Great job.

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Garhom's avatar

Great chapter! This may be my favorite of yours yet.

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Victoria Jensen's avatar

Great writing! I love the sense of mystery you open with.

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Carl Brown's avatar

This whole story is great and I can't wait to see what happens next!

I must say, my favorite little detail is the play on words you used for the pterosaur/terror soarer.

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The Man Behind the Screen's avatar

That imagery isn't how it appeared in my head, but damn, I'll take that as a win! Giger's always been one of my favorite artists so I take that as a big compliment.

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