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Jenny Homan's avatar

So much action here! I love the primitive perspective, even though it's third person its real caveman style gives it a distinctive voice that's so refreshing. Terror soarer is very impressive, and the surprise ending with the darts OOOH! Well done dude! As usual.

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Harold Ember's avatar

Oh, I need to do a total word count.

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