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The Black Knight's avatar

The plot is so thicc, you'll need a Terran-made vibroblade to attempt a slice... and even then. Absolutely loving each and every character, even the bratty Myla. The Huntsman is textbook Mystery X character too, all properly badass, and mysteriously oniony.

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Saumya Sharma's avatar

Another long wait for the next part. . .

I like your narration. And surely I await more heart-fluttering moments between Kat and Paul!

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The Man Behind the Screen's avatar

I'm glad to see you've been enjoying the story despite the lengthy waits, Saumya. I hope it continues to please, and if it doesn't, then I'll just have to double down on those heart-fluttering moments, won't I?

Seriously, though, the support is deeply appreciated. Thank you.

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Saumya Sharma's avatar

Ever ready for more spice 😉

The problem with me is that if I don’t read a story in a go, I tend to forget details, sometimes even the names and plot. Although the chain of events gradually returns to my head as I read, things are a bit blurry initially. No! This absolutely does not mean that I don’t read attentively 🫣 I do, but I guess this is how my brain works around gaps.

But honestly, I am glad I came across your story. I am loving it!

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The Man Behind the Screen's avatar

My wife sometimes struggles with the same issue when it comes to reading or watching long form stories in snippets. I'd happily make this a weekly thing if I could, but this kind of story is one that's somewhat out of my wheelhouse when it comes to how and what I usually write, so it's requiring more time and care to get it right. Personally, I think the tradeoff is worth it, even if doing it the other way would probably improve my metrics.

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Saumya Sharma's avatar

No no no, I understand. You continue posting however you are comfortable. I would still read this story even if it came once every two months 🫶🏻

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