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Definitely thought the branch was going to break. Looking forward to tomorrow's installement!

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That would've been too obvious. Gotta keep the characters (and my readers) on their toes! Glad you're enjoying the story so far.

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Was that a bat-man or terror soarer who monched Old Scar mid air?

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You'll just have to wait until tomorrow to find out, won't you? ;)

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Both lol

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I am inclined to agree with you :D Knowing how my friend constructs his tales and the way he carefully peals each layer of the plot onion, this could've very well been a duo of fighting for their next quarry flying monstrosities!

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Wow. The winged terror missed the first two flying morsels and caught the third.

Will Old Scars be able to escape and fight his way out. Will the two brothers be able to get the rest across the river.

Join us for the next exciting chapter.

Same Man-bat channel, Same Man-Bat time.

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Thanks for this one

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