Love it. Predictable in a good way, circular (like good mythology, fairy tales, imo). I like the time-jumps/skips and how you tell only what is necessary (though, you could've even been more ruthless with editing). And as usual, your strength shines through: The setting. And great use of names! One thing I'm terrible at.
Touching and violent. I greatly enjoyed it, thanks for sharing!
Vivid descriptions immersed me right in to your world!
Thank you very much! This story gripped me very suddenly before I wrote it, so it's heartening to see you found it so enthralling.
Love it. Predictable in a good way, circular (like good mythology, fairy tales, imo). I like the time-jumps/skips and how you tell only what is necessary (though, you could've even been more ruthless with editing). And as usual, your strength shines through: The setting. And great use of names! One thing I'm terrible at.