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The Brothers Krynn's avatar

Hmm... not many comments on this story, how insulting. Good job Dave, I like the intro of the Volva, it was nice and atmospheric and like the descriptions you did a good job with those. I've plans to analyse the next few paragraphs still, but will carry on reading Ch 2.

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Andrew Taylor's avatar

Woah, loving this. The setup and atmosphere is incredible, plus the world-building details are placed perfectly; nothing overt and trotted out but engaging and exciting.

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