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Very nice!

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Jul 2Liked by The Man Behind the Screen

Brilliant!

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Jul 2Liked by The Man Behind the Screen

Dagon needs to just leave people alone, that's all.

It's odd, but the few times I've been to the ocean, it's never bothered me.

Now, a clear day suddenly turning to darkest night with storms that suddenly get quiet and calm? Yes, that makes me nervous.

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Jul 2Liked by The Man Behind the Screen

The ocean also makes me nervous, this story made me nervous. You built up the tension really well, and the ending was creepy af. Well done🖤

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