One thing I immediately noticed with your writing was the pacing - this might be, from my point of view, your best skill. At least with In the Giant's Shadow, and The Claws of the N'longu, it moved like a fast moving river - but not overwhelmingly fast - where the reader (in the kayak) did not capsize. Thanks for breaking down your methods, like the sentence structure. Illuminating.
One thing I immediately noticed with your writing was the pacing - this might be, from my point of view, your best skill. At least with In the Giant's Shadow, and The Claws of the N'longu, it moved like a fast moving river - but not overwhelmingly fast - where the reader (in the kayak) did not capsize. Thanks for breaking down your methods, like the sentence structure. Illuminating.